در Opinion Essay، ممتحن از شما می‌خواهد تا نظر خود را (معمولاً “موافق یا مخالف“) در مورد یک موضوع بیان کنید. برای انجام این امر، داوطلب بایستی دلایل و جزئیاتی را در جهت پشتیبانی نظر خویش ارائه کنند. برای نوشتن چنین مقاله‌ای دو رویکرد متفاوت وجود دارد: یک‌طرفه (one-sided) و متعادل (balanced). در این مقاله به چگونگی نوشتن OPINION ESSAY می پردازیم.
Opinion Essay با رویکرد یک‌طرفه (One-sided approach)
یک مقاله یک طرفه مقاله‌ای است که در آن نظر شما کاملاً متمایل به یک طرف مسئله باشد، به این معنا که شما با موضوع ارائه شده در صورت سوال کاملاً موافق و یا کاملاً مخالف هستید. سعی کنید در این مواقع همیشه با ذکر ۲ دلیل از نظر خودحمایت کنید و هر یک از این دلایل را با ذکر جزئیات آن، در دو پاراگراف بدنه اصلی مقاله خود را مورد تجزیه و تحلیل قرار دهید. در opinion essay یک طرفه در دو جای مقاله خود باید کاملاً واضح و مستقیم نظر خود را بیان کنید:
- Thesis statement in introduction
- Restatement in conclusion
ساختار opinion essay یک طرفه
The introduction
Sentence 1: Paraphrase the background information given in the topic
Sentence 2: State whether you completely agree or completely disagree with the issue.
The body
The first paragraph
Sentence 1: The topic sentence (your 1st idea)
Sentence 2-5/6: Give SPECIFIC examples or explanations to support the idea
The second paragraph
Sentence 1: The topic sentence (your 2nd idea)
Sentence 2-5/6: Give SPECIFIC examples or explanations to support the idea
The conclusion
Restate your opinion that completely agree or completely disagree with the issue given in the topic.
It is generally believed by many people that internet is the root of people’s seclusion from their society. From my perspective, this idea is completely flawed owing to the benefits in terms of communication and knowledge acquisition that internet offers. => This is my opinion about the issue, I wrote “This idea is completely flawed”, which means “I completely disagree with the idea”. This is a very short, clear and direct answer.
Firstly, I would argue that Internet is one of the most powerful facilitators in communication. At the moment, numerous websites such as Facebook or Yahoo offer much faster and more convenient services for users to keep in touch with their friends and relatives regardless of geographic distance. These websites create an online network which connects everyone within their users’ social circle and enables them to send instant messages or to make video calls in a few seconds no matter where they are. People, therefore, can enjoy both the convenience and the swiftness that those services provide. => My first body paragraph only developed the first reason.
Secondly, I believe internet has empowered people to acquire more knowledge about their society than ever before. As a matter of fact, it is able to bring every aspect of life to people, which I think is valuable because people will have a closer look at how their society really is. Latest news about sports, education or criminals for example is updated constantly in many online sources that are open to everyone. This easy accessibility equips people with sufficient information, in other words, they are more aware of the problems lying within their society. => My second body paragraph only developed the second reason.
In conclusion, as the two analyzed reasons above, I strongly disagree with the idea that Internet users are drifting away from their lives because of the online service. => I also restated my opinion here in the conclusion.
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توجه داشته باشید که این مقاله دارای رویکرد یک طرفه میباشد و داوطلب بایستی فقط نظر خود بسته به اینکه کاملاً موافق یا کاملاً مخالف باشد را بسط دهد. بنابراین، ارائه توضیحات در مورد طرف دیگر استدلال غیرضروری میباشد. همیشه به یاد داشته باشید که باید نظر خود را در معرفی مقاله و قسمت نتیجه‌گیری بیان کنید. عدم اظهار یکی از این دو باعث کاهش نمره شما میشود.
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بیان و رد دیدگاه مخالف (Counter-argument & Refutation)
برای اینکه استدلال خود را قوی تر کنید و شانس خود برای کسب نمره بالاتر را افزایش دهید، می‌توانید پاراگرافی بنویسید که در آن نظرات مخالف دیگران را ارائه داده و در ادامه آن نظرات را با دلایل خود رد نمایید. این پاراگراف شامل ۲ بخش است: بیان نظر مخالف (Counter-argument) و رد کردن آن (Refutation) و معمولاً آخرین مورد در بدنه اصلی opinion essay شما است. به مثال زیر در باب چگونگی نوشتن OPINION ESSAY توجه کنید.
Premature life with partners has gained enormous popularity as students reach their adulthood. In my opinion, cohabitation has more of a deleterious impact on their life.
There are several severe problems that this living arrangement would cause. The first and also the biggest concern relates to the possibility of unexpected pregnancy. If the couple who have this premarital experience is poorly equipped with sufficient knowledge about a safe sexual life, the chance of the female partner’s being pregnant might be relatively high. Another drawback is the deterioration in social interactions. As college couples spend almost all their time to take care of their partners because they live in the same place, they hardly have time to hang out with their friends or look for a job. Therefore, their social relationships and skills would suffer.
(Counter-argument) => Advocates of this idea might think that living together during early age of adulthood acts as a test of the couple’s compatibility, hence avoiding the risk of future divorce. They also think that the couple who choose this premarital relationship can support each other with their studies. (Refutation) => However, I think those thoughts are rather ill-founded as the fact might be the opposite. Going through a long intimate relationship like trial marriage, young couples, paradoxically, might be less understanding and sympathetic, which might lead to the early end of their marriage. Furthermore, reality has shown that many university students become more neglectful of their studies while living under the same roof with their partner on account of the fact that most of their time is devoted to each other.
In conclusion, despite the existence of some opinions in favor of this early decision, I do believe students’ lives would be adversely affected.
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Opinion Essay با رویکرد متعادل (Balanced approach)
یک مقاله متعادل مقاله‌ای است که در آن شما به یک طرف از مسئله تمایل دارید اما در عین حال طرف مقابل را انکار نمی‌کنید، بدین معنا که شما با موضوع ارائه شده در صورت سوال تا حدی موافق و یا تا حدی مخالف هستید. هرگز بیطرف نباشید، بپذیرید که ۲ طرف بحث وجود دارد اما انتخاب کنید با کدام یک بیشتر موافقید. در واقع، شما باید هر دو طرف مسئله را تجزیه و تحلیل کرده و در همین حین موضع خود را در قبال موضوع مدنظر بیان کنید. در پاراگراف اول بدنه اصلی مقاله خود درباره طرف ضعیف تر و در پاراگراف بعدی درباره طرف قوی تر صحبت کنید؛ بیاد داشته باشید که برای هر طرف دو دلیل با توضیحات و مثال‌های مرتبط بیاورید. در opinion essay با رویکرد متعادل در ۳ جا بایستی نظر خود را بیان کنید:
Thesis statement in introduction
Topic sentence of second body paragraph
Restatement in conclusion
امیدوارم این مقاله به شما کمک کرده باشد تا درباره چگونگی نوشتن OPINION ESSAY اطلاعات کافی را به دست آورده باشید.
